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Post by naruku Thu Jun 11, 2009 6:15 pm

name kekkei genkai:flash jutsu

type of kekkei genkai:tactical

rank:jounin

discripton:flash jutsu swiches your posishon withe your opponets. a brit flash of lite comes from mii eyes and derring that flash when no body can see you and your opponet have swicht posishon.

weakness:none
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name kekkei genkai:flaming feeten

type of kekkei genkai:phisitcal

rank:jounin

discripton:Flamimg feeten puts chkara in the form of fire arond your legs or atless up to your kness.The chakra flams increas speed and stranth in your leg.

weakness:Burn skin or whatever you are wairing if you can't controll it.


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Post by Kenshi Thu Jun 11, 2009 6:17 pm

DENIED

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Post by Kyouken Uchiha Thu Jun 11, 2009 6:18 pm

There is so much grammatical errors that is hard to comphrend what you are trying to say.....I cant even get the gist of it
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Post by naruku Fri Jun 12, 2009 6:57 pm

i improved it
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Post by tradebuzzing2 Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:53 pm

No, you did not.

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Post by Kyouken Uchiha Sat Jun 13, 2009 7:04 am

This is still hard to read, this won't be improve unless you fully correct everything that u written.
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Post by naruku Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:15 pm

IM DONE
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Post by Kyouken Uchiha Sun Jul 05, 2009 10:43 pm

No, the mispellings

The first part, how does that even work? Flash of light....alright vague but could you put that in a complete sentence?
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